It is nearly time for us year 8 students to finish our journey through primary and intermediate. And to start a new journey through college. This year has been so awesome. Learning new things. We had fun getting to know each other. We all will miss this school so mutch. This year we did a lot of fun activities together and learnt how to work as a team.
Good bye St Pius x
Wednesday, December 10, 2014
Friday, November 14, 2014
Today we made a spiral about our hope and desire. It was to put in a bottle to make a sculpture to put up in the viaduct. When we were ready Petelo came and asked us to come over to the hall. And then we put our artwork in the bottles by the help of Alice and Tina. After we played a game with Alice. She made us laugh.
Friday, October 31, 2014
My special place is Home. It is my special place because I can relax and enjoy the company of my family. Also It has a lot of good and bad memories. It is a very old place. My family lived there for nearly 20 years.
Without a home I will not know where my special place will be. It is a very special place to me. Home is a place my family and I belong. My home is the heart off the family.
Everyone in my family grew up in the same house. Sometimes People criticise my house. By saying its old and ugly. But I don't care because it holds all my childhood memories. One of my memories was when I was riding my bike down the hill in front of my house I went straight into the wall off the house.
A Lot of celebrations and gatherings have been held in my house. Everyone in my family has had their birthday in the family home. Even Christmas. Some people think my home is ugly, but thats not it. Its the love inside the house that makes it home.
Wednesday, September 24, 2014
Wednesday, September 17, 2014
• audience is hooked in with an interesting quotes or jokes or statistical information
Presentation and Delivery
• Facial and body gestures must enhance not distract from the speech
• Use of eye-contact
• Relaxed stance
• Use of pause to allow the audience to assimilate the message
•Variety of pace
Content of Speech
• The message of the speech is clear
• Is it relevant,, meaningful clear and concise? 6
• Ideas are well elaborated and supported.
Argument is summed up
Has an overall impact Audience Reaction
POSITIVE FEEDBACK FOR MY SPEECH
- I made eye contact with audience .
- Use of pause to allow the audience to assimilate the message.
- I involve my audience by making them laugh.
SUGGESTION FOR FUTURE:
I could of done better. Use of specific vocabulary
Very good reflection Dalaney. You had a great topic and you were passionate about it. YOu could do better by adding more details to support your ideas. REMEMBER - ELABORATE YOUR IDEAS