Wednesday, December 10, 2014

2014 year reflection

It is nearly time for us year 8 students to finish our journey through primary and intermediate. And to start a new journey through college. This year has been so awesome. Learning new things. We had fun getting to know each other. We all will miss this school so mutch. This year we did a lot of fun  activities together and learnt how to work as a team.

                                                             Good bye St Pius x


For the community:
Dear everlasting God help our community and parish make the important choices they need to make for the better of us. Amen.

Friday, November 14, 2014

The Roots.


Today we made a spiral about our hope and desire. It was to put in a bottle to make a sculpture to put up in the viaduct. When we were ready Petelo came and asked us to come over to the hall. And then we put our artwork in the bottles by the help of Alice and Tina. After we played a game with Alice. She made us laugh.

Friday, October 31, 2014

Special place

Special Place....
My special place is Home. It is my special place because I can relax and enjoy the company of my family. Also It has a lot of good and bad memories. It is a very old place. My family lived there for nearly 20 years.

Without a home I will not know where my special place will be. It is a very special place to me. Home is a place my family and I  belong. My home is the heart off the family.

Everyone in my family  grew up in the same house. Sometimes People criticise my house. By saying its old and ugly. But I don't care because it holds all my childhood memories. One of my memories was when I was riding my bike down the hill in front of my house I went straight into the wall off the house.

A Lot of celebrations and gatherings have been held in my house. Everyone in my family has had their birthday in the family home. Even Christmas. Some people think my home is ugly, but thats not it. Its the love inside the house that makes it home.

Wednesday, September 17, 2014

Judging Criteria



• audience is hooked in with an interesting quotes or jokes or statistical information

Presentation and Delivery
• Facial and body gestures must enhance not distract from   the speech
• Use of eye-contact
• Relaxed stance
• Use of pause to allow the audience to assimilate the message
•Variety of pace

Content of Speech
• The message of the speech is clear
• Is it relevant,, meaningful clear and concise? 6
• Ideas are well elaborated and supported.
  • Use of specific vocabulary
  • Clear sequence and flow

Argument is summed up
Has an overall impact Audience Reaction

             / 5
  • I made eye contact with audience .
  • Use of pause to allow the audience to assimilate the message.
  • I involve my audience by making them laugh.

I could of done better.  Use of specific vocabulary

Very good reflection Dalaney.  You had a great topic and you were passionate about it.  YOu could do better by adding more details to support your ideas.    REMEMBER - ELABORATE YOUR IDEAS