Come work for Jesus.

Judging Criteria

                                                                                                            

SPEAKER:	CLASS
TITLE:		MARK
INTRODUCTION • audience is hooked in with an interesting quotes or jokes or statistical information	6	/10
Presentation and Delivery • Facial and body gestures must enhance not distract from   the speech • Use of eye-contact • Relaxed stance • Use of pause to allow the audience to assimilate the message •Variety of pace	6	/15,
Content of Speech • The message of the speech is clear • Is it relevant,, meaningful clear and concise? 6 • Ideas are well elaborated and supported. Use of specific vocabulary Clear sequence and flow	6	/20
CONCLUSION Argument is summed up Has an overall impact Audience Reaction	3	/ 5

POSITIVE FEEDBACK FOR MY SPEECH

• I made eye contact with audience .
• Use of pause to allow the audience to assimilate the message.
• I involve my audience by making them laugh.

SUGGESTION FOR FUTURE:    

I could of done better.  Use of specific vocabulary

Very good reflection Dalaney.  You had a great topic and you were passionate about it.  YOu could do better by adding more details to support your ideas.    REMEMBER - ELABORATE YOUR IDEAS

The visit

Ambury farm

Refeltion on about reading.

The book i read today was called THE FEAR FACTOR. It was about a group of kids That joined a competition called fear factor. It was about the challenges they did and who scared they were to join. Some of them were going to chicken out but they didn't because they didn't want to be called a chicken.  They were all scared off something. The characters are Carlo,Benji,Stace,Hari,Maddy,Pumpkin and Kylie. For my activity I had to put words in the correct place. And I had to Create a news paper. The website I was on is Sun-shine Online.

Maths problem

There are 12 boxes of donuts. Each box has seven donuts.How many donuts all together?.

7 x 10 = 70

2 x 7 =14

70 + 14 = 84

I used addition and multiplication to get the answer.

Mat weaving

In room 7 we are learning about procedural writing. We were folwing the steps on how to weave a mat.First we cut the paper into strips that are 3 cm apart. Then we put black paper strips threw the coloured paper. It was really fun weaving the mats. After we finished everything Mrs Tui  laminated or mat so that we can use it as a table mat.

Kindness virtue

Kindness is a virtue that everyone should practices. Also we use it in our everyday lives. Kindness is showing someone that you care about them. Or doing something to make them feel happy. Also it is showing love and compassion to others around us who are sad or needs your help.

If we did not have any kindness no one will listen to each other and also there will be a lot of violence in this world. And this world will  be lonely without kindness. Kindness helps everyone feel connected to everything and everyone.

You can practise kindness by looking around you and seeing if someone is not happy about something and talk to them about it.